There are many kinds of music in the world , but music needs bands to play them.Different kinds of music need different bands.What kind of the band do I want if I can create my own band?Maybe I would want a band that plays classical music.
There are many kinds of classical music.There are concertos , sonatas , symphonies , musicals , operas and so on.But they all need many people to play,so if I can create my own classical music band , I will play famous songs.And who will I ask to join my band?Maybe I will ask Nina to play the violin , Vivian to play the piano , and I can be a singer.My band just has three people but it is enough.
Most people like to listen to pop music.But if you want to listen to classical music , we can play good music for you.We will play " The Phantom of the Opera " , " Violin Concerto - Spring " , and many other songs that are Beethoven or Mozart's creations.
If we can , I hope our band can play in the National Music Hall.But it is too difficult now.Wecan start playing at the park , then if we become more famous , maybe our dream can come true.
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Very good organization , and great detail.Try to indent when you start a new paragraph.
在這個世界上，音樂有分很多種，但是一定要有一個樂團，才能演奏出音樂。不同種類的音樂需要不同種類的樂團，如果我有一個樂團，我會希望他是屬於哪一類的？或許我會希望組個古典樂樂團吧！ 古典樂也分很多種，例如說：協奏曲、奏鳴曲、交響曲、歌舞劇、歌劇等等的，但是他們往往都需要動用到大筆人力方能演奏，所以如果我有一個古典樂樂團，我會希望能演奏出一些較有名的歌曲；我還會問說：「有誰想要加入我的樂團？」，我應該會請Nina來演奏小提琴，Vivian彈鋼琴，而我則當主唱。 我的樂團雖然只有三個人，不過－－這已經足夠了。 大多數的人都喜歡聽流行音樂，但是，若是你想要換種心情，聽聽古典音樂的話，我們會給你最棒的演出，我們會演奏出一些貝多芬跟莫札特創作的曲子，例如「歌劇魅影」還有「小提琴協奏曲 - 春天」。 如果可以，我會希望我們可以在國家音樂廳演出，但是在現在，這對我們來說太困難了，我們可以循環漸進，從公園開始，等到我們變的小有名氣，或許我們的夢想就會實現。
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